洪濤是一名相當優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生。他在廣東商學(xué)院學(xué)會計， 拿過兩次獎學(xué)金， 還擔(dān)任過班里的體育委員。他本人也確實特別喜歡體育， 他是一個長跑健將， 曾經(jīng)在校運會上得過1500米亞軍！（點評： 每一小的開頭是概括， 然后分項支持剛才的觀點， 這種方法和自我介紹完全一樣， 值得推薦！切忌從頭到尾羅列很多信息泛泛而談， 一定要談出一兩個有事實有數(shù)字的亮點來， 才能讓聽眾覺得有意思。）

　　除了學(xué)習(xí)， 洪濤也做過很多兼職。其中包括在會計師事務(wù)所實習(xí)， 還做過促銷員和導(dǎo)游。最有意思的是， 洪濤在去年春節(jié)的花市上和同學(xué)擺了一個攤， 5天時間掙了2000塊錢?。c評： 再一次用數(shù)字作為亮點， 激發(fā)聽眾的興趣。）

　　這就是我對洪濤的初步了解， 謝謝大家！

　?。c評： 介紹別人和自我介紹的次序完全一致： 先介紹姓名、 家鄉(xiāng)， 再介紹在校經(jīng)歷和校外活動。）

　　介紹其他候選人英文示范

　　Now, let me introduce Mr. Zhang Hongtao to all of you. Hongtao wants us to use his English name, Hank, h-a-n-k. Hank means "a brave boy" in English.

　　Hank is from Shanshui, but his parents were from Inner Mongolia, I think you agree with me that Hank looks like a man from the grassland!

　　Hank is an excellent student in Guangdong Commercial College. He won scholarships twice, and he was in charge of sports matters in his class. You can tell that Hank loves sports. He is good at long-distance running, he was the runner-up in the 1,500 meter race in his school!

　　Besides studying, Hank held some part-time jobs, including intern at an accounting firm, promotion assistant and tour guide. Most interestingly, Hank made more than 2,000 RMB in five days when he sold flowers last Spring Festival. What a rich young man!

　　That's something I've learnt about Hank. Thanks for listening!