洪濤是一名相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生。他在廣東商學(xué)院學(xué)會(huì)計(jì)， 拿過(guò)兩次獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金， 還擔(dān)任過(guò)班里的體育委員。他本人也確實(shí)特別喜歡體育， 他是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)跑健將， 曾經(jīng)在校運(yùn)會(huì)上得過(guò)1500米亞軍?。c(diǎn)評(píng)： 每一小的開(kāi)頭是概括， 然后分項(xiàng)支持剛才的觀點(diǎn)， 這種方法和自我介紹完全一樣， 值得推薦！切忌從頭到尾羅列很多信息泛泛而談， 一定要談出一兩個(gè)有事實(shí)有數(shù)字的亮點(diǎn)來(lái)， 才能讓聽(tīng)眾覺(jué)得有意思。）

　　除了學(xué)習(xí)， 洪濤也做過(guò)很多兼職。其中包括在會(huì)計(jì)師事務(wù)所實(shí)習(xí)， 還做過(guò)促銷(xiāo)員和導(dǎo)游。最有意思的是， 洪濤在去年春節(jié)的花市上和同學(xué)擺了一個(gè)攤， 5天時(shí)間掙了2000塊錢(qián)?。c(diǎn)評(píng)： 再一次用數(shù)字作為亮點(diǎn)， 激發(fā)聽(tīng)眾的興趣。）

　　這就是我對(duì)洪濤的初步了解， 謝謝大家！

　?。c(diǎn)評(píng)： 介紹別人和自我介紹的次序完全一致： 先介紹姓名、 家鄉(xiāng)， 再介紹在校經(jīng)歷和校外活動(dòng)。）

　　介紹其他候選人英文示范

　　Now, let me introduce Mr. Zhang Hongtao to all of you. Hongtao wants us to use his English name, Hank, h-a-n-k. Hank means "a brave boy" in English.

　　Hank is from Shanshui, but his parents were from Inner Mongolia, I think you agree with me that Hank looks like a man from the grassland!

　　Hank is an excellent student in Guangdong Commercial College. He won scholarships twice, and he was in charge of sports matters in his class. You can tell that Hank loves sports. He is good at long-distance running, he was the runner-up in the 1,500 meter race in his school!

　　Besides studying, Hank held some part-time jobs, including intern at an accounting firm, promotion assistant and tour guide. Most interestingly, Hank made more than 2,000 RMB in five days when he sold flowers last Spring Festival. What a rich young man!

　　That's something I've learnt about Hank. Thanks for listening!